Weedle's head looks flat. The shading should be rounder. Right now that dark shade looks pretty straight and parallel to the middle shade. Also concerning the flatness, the back of the head's lineart could be more curvaceous as well.
The spike also seems pretty flat and lacks contrast in the shades. Don't be afraid with adding contrast to those whites. It also seems a bit too symmetrically placed and drawn on the head. Perhaps move it forward a little?
I look forward to more. =)
The spike also seems pretty flat and lacks contrast in the shades. Don't be afraid with adding contrast to those whites. It also seems a bit too symmetrically placed and drawn on the head. Perhaps move it forward a little?
I look forward to more. =)
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