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girl WIP + oldstuff
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i think you could give the arms more volume, as they're quite noodly for now. the navel seems rather far to the right, if i compare it to the rotation of the chest. the legs look quite dark compared to the rest, too, so toning down the darker shade could sort that out. i'm tempted to say that the thigh is quite fat; if it bothers you, you can trim a few pixels on the inside of the thigh, from the top downwards.

i'm looking forward to more!
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girl WIP + oldstuff - by newGuy - 06-06-2011, 08:21 AM
RE: girl WIP + oldstuff - by Lord Melchior - 06-06-2011, 08:26 AM
RE: girl WIP + oldstuff - by newGuy - 06-06-2011, 08:37 AM
RE: girl WIP + oldstuff - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 06-06-2011, 11:14 AM
RE: girl WIP + oldstuff - by Lord Melchior - 06-06-2011, 01:20 PM
RE: girl WIP + oldstuff - by newGuy - 06-06-2011, 04:05 PM
RE: girl WIP + oldstuff - by Lord Melchior - 06-07-2011, 10:33 AM
RE: girl WIP + oldstuff - by Gors - 06-08-2011, 09:22 AM
RE: girl WIP + oldstuff - by newGuy - 06-10-2011, 10:19 PM
RE: girl WIP + oldstuff - by Lord Melchior - 06-11-2011, 03:53 AM
RE: girl WIP + oldstuff - by newGuy - 06-13-2011, 11:14 PM
RE: girl WIP + oldstuff - by isael-21 - 06-14-2011, 11:58 PM
RE: girl WIP + oldstuff - by newGuy - 07-13-2011, 04:08 PM
RE: girl WIP + oldstuff - by Sengir - 07-13-2011, 07:42 PM

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