Slash & Charmander

[brandman1996]

It's pretty clear you don't know anything about the human body at all

I guess I don't since your posting this.

you should go learn about that first. Like seriously read not just...look up a few references and try to adjust. Read.

Okay, so is this referring to the outline or my previous attempt?

both sets of limbs and the feet, gah. It's pretty clear that you're guessing on the folds, too, and I'm pretty sure such tight sleeves wouldn't cast such a dramatic shadow and you don't have nearly enough contrast. The super light shade of gray on the skull is completely unnecessary.

Okay good info when I fill in the outline.

And the face is incredibly hard to read

That's because ↓

that's because slash doesn't have a face

lol, no it's just that you can't even see slash's face barely anywhere. It's because all of his hair, so I did that on purpose.

slash doesn't even exist.
I know about this when I was 6, my mom told me.

0.o

So anyways any cc on the outline?