Making nothing out of something

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Thank you guys! Really seemed to nail all the faults in my work, Chris. You're way to good at editing. =b

Those pokemon are kinda old, but I guess I should go ahead and fix them since you guys provided such good criticism and I would prefer it wasn't to go to waste.

Thanks, and more to come.

edit: here is stuff that I wont be willing to change or edit at this time, but feel free to give me criticism so I can apply them for future pieces.




Also I'm aware that the grass sucks in the mockup. I'll fix er' when I'm off my commissions. Thanks!