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I agree with BynineB, it's flat because you don't have any shades and your light source is all over the place. Assuming it's coming from the top left hand-side because of the highlights on the eyes, you could approach it like this:

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It's quite a messy edit, and there are a few things that I didn't really do or fix, but hopefully it gives you an idea.

Keep it up, it's looking great!
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Take 2 - by Sengir - 10-15-2010, 04:45 PM
RE: Take 2 - by triptych - 10-15-2010, 04:57 PM
RE: Take 2 - by Sengir - 10-15-2010, 05:15 PM
RE: Take 2 - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 10-15-2010, 05:23 PM
RE: Take 2 - by peltos - 10-16-2010, 06:10 AM
RE: Take 2 - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 10-16-2010, 07:54 AM
RE: Take 2 - by Neoriceisgood - 10-16-2010, 07:59 AM
RE: Take 2 - by Ninspriterx - 10-16-2010, 08:52 AM
RE: Take 2 - by Sengir - 10-16-2010, 09:36 AM
RE: Take 2 - by Nindo - 10-16-2010, 12:05 PM
RE: Take 2 - by BynineB - 10-17-2010, 01:12 PM
RE: Take 2 - by Delicious - 10-17-2010, 03:06 PM

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