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City Lights; Short Film thing I did
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I can't offer much critique as I have no idea what you were trying to do other than show the adventure you and your friends had. Only thing I Might nit-pick is the occasional sound that interferes with the music in the video, but thats only at one point (in a car I believe) where its noticable.

As for comments, I think the song selected is really good, the composition of all the shots, the transitions, it all moves quite well and has a nice flow I think. The whole thing feels like it captures the mood of an early morning adventure and youngsters being youngsters. Between the music and the video itself, I found it really nice, hell as odd as my mood has been it really swayed me into feeling nice.

It's a good video, the very end is a nice touch.

I'll leave a comment on youTube (as PhazonZombie) as well and rate it. I'd love to see what else you make.
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City Lights; Short Film thing I did - by Comix - 07-13-2009, 03:26 PM
RE: City Lights; Short Film thing I did - by Dark Ultima - 07-13-2009, 05:32 PM

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