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I made charmander in tiny toons style (not really
it was in the title
) for a friend who's making a pokedex with "new style" pokemon ...
I was only wondering if my new style was okay and if you had any tips to make it greater
So here's the charmander next to his reference :
![[Image: Charmander_Tiny_Toons_style_by_rayman18.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc03.deviantart.com%2Ffs46%2Ff%2F2009%2F221%2F6%2Fc%2FCharmander_Tiny_Toons_style_by_rayman18.png&hash=55ef2857a50f1a248f4519a155341091)
So, like it?
Have a nice day
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Why are those feet so huge?
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Because I made them too much like the ones of buster bunny...
I made them smaller :
![[Image: Charmender_2_by_rayman18.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc09.deviantart.com%2Ffs46%2Ff%2F2009%2F221%2F6%2Fc%2FCharmender_2_by_rayman18.png&hash=ff486ee058cd4f2ebb55513be571667d)
Looks better?
Thanks for the comment
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(08-09-2009, 08:20 PM)rayman18 Wrote: Because I made them too much like the ones of buster bunny...
I made them smaller :
Looks better?
Thanks for the comment
make them even smaller.
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Ok I made them even smaller
And I think i got it :
![[Image: Charmander_3_by_rayman18.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc03.deviantart.com%2Ffs47%2Ff%2F2009%2F221%2F3%2F9%2FCharmander_3_by_rayman18.png&hash=0f72c1cdbbfcf804c1510f0f62d54ec5)
A: with bigger claw
B: With smaller claw
I think the feet of B looks more like the real charmander feet
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I think you should try making the sprite from scratch and use a reference. Also the eyes look realy off.
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For the eyes, it was a jpeg promblem... and anyway it's recolored yay!
And fr the feet, I made the claws smaller, really smaller like on charmander's feet (I haven't follow the reference enough)
so heres that attemp (Hope I don't annoy you too much...) :
![[Image: Charmander_4_by_rayman18.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc02.deviantart.com%2Ffs46%2Ff%2F2009%2F221%2F8%2F1%2FCharmander_4_by_rayman18.png&hash=b698c95ecb2c815833210e4acb253554)
It's A
Thanks a lot for your help!
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The eyes look really creepy, honestly.
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Hum...
kinda lol
Have any idea to make them less creepy ? (I'll start working on it now ... I'll check if you have any ideas
)
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Uhh...maybe you could try imitating the style of the bugs bunny eyes that are there. See how that works. =D
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They should not be so close to each other. His head also looks pretty strange.
Use this as reference.
![[Image: charmander.gif]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fguidesarchive.ign.com%2Fguides%2F12045%2Fimages%2Fcharmander.gif&hash=b015759b8b7ba028118a979b0d0e2ee0)
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08-09-2009, 09:22 PM
(This post was last modified: 08-09-2009, 09:23 PM by rayman18.)
yeah yeah I see what you're saying
I moved the left eye (for us his right) closer to the outline
And I remove some of the green pixels and it looks less creepy
And Yeah I changed his head , his cheek were too high
here it is :
![[Image: charmander5_by_rayman18.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc06.deviantart.com%2Ffs47%2Ff%2F2009%2F221%2F0%2F5%2Fcharmander5_by_rayman18.png&hash=1e9e20db2d37a3e941dd04d25c6ad477)
Looks really more like charmander ^^
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I think the eye should be at least a little smaller.
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and smaller eyes here it goes
![[Image: charmander_6_by_rayman18.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Ffc01.deviantart.com%2Ffs48%2Ff%2F2009%2F221%2Fd%2F3%2Fcharmander_6_by_rayman18.png&hash=e77e7ae8d0a1fa00e6d151d04e0d3753)
I go to bed, I'll check your replies tommerrow morning
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AWESOME JOB!!! It looks more like Charmander now!!
