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#1
07-31-2009, 12:14 AM
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Stole the color for the stars and sky off of iLKke's "The Tower"
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#2
07-31-2009, 08:27 AM
I like this. Give the clouds a lot more volume to make it nice and atmospheric. I'd like to see more of this please Smile
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#3
07-31-2009, 09:09 AM
Could use some more AA with a bit more definition. As Chris said, the clouds could use some volume and I think the moon-balloons could use an extra color to smooth them out. Nice work so far though!
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#4
07-31-2009, 10:45 PM
Your colors could use some saturation. However, I like the dithering on the ballons.
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08-01-2009, 05:37 AM (This post was last modified: 08-01-2009, 05:38 AM by Smash.)
Make the mountains and clouds stand out more. I could hardly distinguish the shapes because of the darkness.


This unmistakenly reminds me of a sci-fi movie I say years ago, something about robots in the future, if memory serves right. Im too lazy to dig it out now though.
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