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Hot blonde chick and a zombie.
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Or not.


So... I want to study platforming. It feels like if i master this, i can master anything. So, i will try and master.;.... Let me show what i have so far:

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Her name is Ledah and i made her to this platforming.. Thingy on my mind.
And i gave a shot at animating her, even:
http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/45127.htm#

Could you people C+C it? (i mean, everything) Thank you.
Sorry for my mistakes on english, people..... I am Brazilian, and to worsen that... i learnt english playing Final Fantasy and asking my mother.

EDIT: Now, 4 years have passed, and I`m an english teacher. Heart
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#2
that's smoooooooooth :o
it looks good, but you could make her portrait a bit smoother.
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#3
Is that a zombie or a Tonberry?

I like the style, though the amount of contrast in the ground I'm not as big a fan of - I'd either give it at least a little AA or just reduce the contrast in general (of the dirt below the ground, that is)
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Updates:
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Sorry for my mistakes on english, people..... I am Brazilian, and to worsen that... i learnt english playing Final Fantasy and asking my mother.

EDIT: Now, 4 years have passed, and I`m an english teacher. Heart
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#5
your females have really broad shoulders and thick arms in thier portraits
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The last one is a guy :p
Sorry for the coldness in the last post. I eill keep what you all said in mind. About the BG, it's incomplete, yet... :p
Sorry for my mistakes on english, people..... I am Brazilian, and to worsen that... i learnt english playing Final Fantasy and asking my mother.

EDIT: Now, 4 years have passed, and I`m an english teacher. Heart
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u.o
Yes. I will keep foward. I ditched everything in the first mockup.
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Sorry for my mistakes on english, people..... I am Brazilian, and to worsen that... i learnt english playing Final Fantasy and asking my mother.

EDIT: Now, 4 years have passed, and I`m an english teacher. Heart
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It's jpeg'ed
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I was editting at the moment you replied. I didn't notice i uploaded a BMP Ouch!
Thank you, anyway ^-^
Sorry for my mistakes on english, people..... I am Brazilian, and to worsen that... i learnt english playing Final Fantasy and asking my mother.

EDIT: Now, 4 years have passed, and I`m an english teacher. Heart
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