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Hey everybody, I'm new to spriting, so take it easy on me. =P
This is probably my largest edit/custom I've done and I'd like some C+C before I continue.
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Credit to #SAM# for his mario (on left)
I used his sprite largely on the face (couldn't get it in style xD) and his shoes (looked kind of lame without it)
Thanks a lot everyone =]
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That's not eternia style....
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07-14-2009, 09:47 PM
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Really? I wasn't familiar with it either...except when I found #SAM#'s mario sheet, that's the style he said it was in.
What style is it? xD
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First of all, this is eternia style:
http://www.spriters-resource.com/psx_ps2...heet/25284
Second, I have no Idea what that style is.
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07-14-2009, 10:02 PM
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Haha, well, I was just going off what I saw...maybe I misinterpreted what it was...nevertheless, my bad. xD
What do you think of it, though? You sound like you know what you're doing. xD
Edit -
Here's what made me think it was called that:
http://www.spriters-resource.com/communi...p?tid=5666
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The shading my be Tales of, but shading's not all that defines a style, the proportions of the style are way off.
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Yeah, I think it's supposed to be that way. You know, to emphasize different things, such as #SAM# did on Mario's hands.
What do you think I can do to improve it? I'm not so happy with the hands or the shading on the pants...
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(07-15-2009, 08:42 AM)halfangelfreak Wrote: The shading my be Tales of, but shading's not all that defines a style, the proportions of the style are way off.
This feels like Tales, and altering Mario or Luigi's proportions would probably leave them unrecognizable. All in all, i think this is pretty awesome.
Sorry for my mistakes on english, people..... I am Brazilian, and to worsen that... i learnt english playing Final Fantasy and asking my mother.
EDIT: Now, 4 years have passed, and I`m an english teacher.
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Thanks a lot man. =]
Anything you think I could mess with to make it look better?
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Update:
![[Image: 2qmdrav.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi26.tinypic.com%2F2qmdrav.png&hash=bad705574cf5f5f383324ed821af6a05)
I think I've fixed the problems with the shading on his overalls, what do you guys think?
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Nice, it's called "Tales of the World"
http://www.spriters-resource.com/resources/tut/totw/ I don't know if this is BB Code. But that should work.
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Thanks man, I'm actually almost done spriting peach right now (guess I'm inspired by Mario characters xD) and I'm having a bit of trouble on the head.
The tutorial should help me, though. =]
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Luigi's nose should be bigger.
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07-16-2009, 04:44 PM
(This post was last modified: 07-16-2009, 06:11 PM by Link.)
Yeah, Luigi's nose is smaller than mario's, right?
If I made his nose any bigger (1 pixel) It would be the same size as Mario's. =\
Edit - Hey guys, I'm also attempting Peach, but I really can't seem to get the head right...
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If anyone would like to edit it, it's fair game. =]
(I put it in a bounding box where the tip of her crown should touch, that way, she will be proportional to Mario and Luigi.)
