My Sprites (Current: Captain Falcon *Stance Finished*)

[DoB]

Hi, I am new to the forums, not to the site... and here is my lil corner, where i shall be posting the products of my boredom... to start off, here's Falcon:
New palette

C+C (its custom but i used jump ultimate stars as a style, and used brawl colors)

i'll do more when i get bored again and if i get enough comments...
Old Stuff:
Custom
JUS custom

[Cobalt Blue]

it can't be custom if you used another sprite as a base, fyi.

[DoB]

fyi, i didn't, its custom, only in the style of jus...

[DoB]

i changed the palette... what do you guys think?

[Omegakyogre]

i changed the palette... what do you guys think?

It's not bad, but in my personal opinion the black lines on the inside of the sprite work against you in a couple of ways. First, it makes the sprite look worse than it actually is. Second, it takes up enough space to prohibit you from adding a lot of detail and depth, which is a real shame.
Long story short, I'd get rid of the black inside of the sprite.

[DoB]

I understand your advice but i think that removing the black lines will run from it's original style. In JUS, the sprites are all outlined black and their clothing are separated by black outlines...
I'm in the process of finishing the stance, so i'll update soon...

[Ton]

A good start. Plan on doing any more with him?

[DoB]

Yup
here's the beta stance:

i know i have to fix the scarf and probably the boots, but i think its ok for now, c+c please

[TPoe]

it looks like hes dancing cause his foot

[DoB]

fixed boot and added fist shake + fixed scarf

[GrooveMan.exe]

His right knee is too long compared to his left especially when the knee turns inwards.