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So do you think?
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Everything looks fine except the background, which looks sloppy.
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#3
It seems like it would be more of a Wii game Tongue
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#4
Gotta say I'm fairly impressed with how seamless the characters and text look

but seriously, ditch the background.
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#5
Thanks guys, and I'll change the background.
Updated, check first post.
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I think you changed too much...

I meant change the background, but the characters themselves were perfectly fine.
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The text has some pretty tacky effects, and I'm not so sure about that purple cloud. The rest is fine, though I'm not sure why Mario and Yoshi are in a circle of some kind. I think there could be a better way of presenting it. Think more about the use of colour to create depth and highlight certain aspects.
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