Magicians

[LilGrim1991]

It's part of an idea I have for a Television Series, haven't decided on a name yet. Its about a magician in his mid 20's called William Magicker who is always undermined because he does everything differently and refuses to conform to the performance magic community as they expected him to be just like his now deceased father, and so he receives no help in his dream to become a world-famous magician. His attitude is very complacent most of the time, but he is brought out of it on occasion by his apprentice, a young girl 8 or 9 years old that is training to become a magician, although most people confuse her for his "Lovely Assistant", even though she really wants to be the head of the performance. He develops a close relationship with her through their adventures, she calls him "Billy" endearingly and they take care of each other in many levels on the way to fame. Now, whether the magic is real or not, I can't say. A Magician never reveals his secrets.


There are some bad encounters with certain other performers like in this case, an underwater mermaid performer with some evil intentions.

[Mabelma]

I like the drawings and the basic idea but I will really like to see more work(drawings).
Is this going to be a game?
I can't believe I'm the first one to post.
The mermaid is a bit bad compare to the magician and the apprentice cause she isn't that detailed make her hands more detailed and her body(texture).

[Chutzpar]

Is this going to be a game?

It's part of an idea I have for a Television Series

[Mabelma]

Thanks Zeemort I didn't see that.
Sorry by the way Zemmort could you check your topic here?(your characters)

[Chutzpar]

I already did.
I am choosing to ignore it.

[Mabelma]

But Why?
And something new to the drawing the girl behind the magician looks odd move here a bit to the side.

[Chutzpar]

(Sorry to carry on derailing this, Grim)
Because I don't have to do your work for you. There are plenty of resources online that tell you how to properly structure the body and google isn't exactly a harsh mistress. It strikes me that you're not looking to actually think and improve, you're looking for a get-good-quick method, and there isn't one.

Most artists are big enough and ugly enough to learn under their own steam.

[Mabelma]

Yeah sorry about that I went and got some resources on drawing and I'm beginning to draw some good drawings but just faces right now.
I posted that when I was about to give up but then I decided to improve in any way I could so I went to a website called manga university and learned some awesome stuff on drawing.

[LilGrim1991]

....Um, I'll scan some of my other drawings?...

(And the mermaid is really me just trying out different ideas for other magicians, not all are bad, but some will want to eliminate the competition. I had other ideas like a "Las Vegasesque" Voodoo Magician, or a Tiger Trainer, or an Illusionist, and a bunch of other stuff, I'm just testing out different ideas, the only part I really spent time on was William and the little girl(whose name I'm still trying to decide on) cause they're the only part that matter)

[Mabelma]

Thanks Grim I'll critic them once I see them.
I think this really has some potential.