DragonBreeZee Cell

[Kasplant]

Hi all,

I have a project going on where Im trying to make an ORPG based on Dragon Ball. Graphics Im using are from the old Breeze Revolution tiles/sprites and I have added my custom stuff. 

Wanted to know what people think and if you are interested to see more! 

[JewyB]

Oaky, i quickly looked up Breeze Revolution and am no expert but i have a few suggestions in general.


Your sprite needs a lot more contrast in the colours selected, right now its not super readable, and the shading is barely visible at all, more contrast will help the image pop. Second, i think you need to alter the proportions on the face a little, based on what i could see, the eyes are much bigger, which i think will help the sprite also, i do believe cells eyes actually just touch on his beak. I think maybe make the peak of his... Top... Head-arrow-spike-helmet(what is the right word?) dip a bit more as right now it looks flat.

I like your attention to details, i think your colour choice just needs work, and a little work on readability.

Also, i love anyone who sprites anything from DBZ so i look forward to seeing you improve and seeing more of your work!

[Kasplant]

Oaky, i quickly looked up Breeze Revolution and am no expert but i have a few suggestions in general.


Your sprite needs a lot more contrast in the colours selected, right now its not super readable, and the shading is barely visible at all, more contrast will help the image pop. Second, i think you need to alter the proportions on the face a little, based on what i could see, the eyes are much bigger, which i think will help the sprite also, i do believe cells eyes actually just touch on his beak. I think maybe make the peak of his... Top... Head-arrow-spike-helmet(what is the right word?) dip a bit more as right now it looks flat.

I like your attention to details, i think your colour choice just needs work, and a little work on readability.

Also, i love anyone who sprites anything from DBZ so i look forward to seeing you improve and seeing more of your work!

Hi, 

Sorry I haven't replied before but apparently I don't get notified of replies! :

Thanks for the feedback! Others have mentioned the colour choices and I do agree I need to work on that, so I will! 

I think I chose better colours in this one: 



Still learning a lot, so I appreciate any kind of feedback!

[JewyB]

The colours are definitely coming a long a lot better, i would say to have a bit more contrast between your highlights and other shades however, as right now your lightest shade is a little too close to your base colour, in my opinion. The readability is definitely improved fro mthe cell sprite, but it seems like your lack of contrast is a major issue, as i THINK the body is shaded but can't quite tell.