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Death comes in a tuxedo...
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I was so bored the other day, I came up with this idea...

The Death had a son, Junior, but he's ashamed and disappointed of his kid, because he is not as evil, cold, etc. as him.
Years have passed and the Death is too old for the job now and he's gonna retire, but who's gonna take the Death's place?
Junior tries to show his dad he's able to replace him, so he visits the human world. Now he's gotta take some precious souls to show his dad he's not the kid he used to be anymore...

There are probably many plot holes, but meh, I'll think of something later, just let me know what to change/add...
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C&C is/are welcome...

oh and BroBro is officially dead.
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(11-13-2008, 03:01 PM)EdpR Wrote: oh and BroBro is officially dead.


Cry

Ah well, looks nice. But the Skeleton enemy looks stiff. I'm not really sure how to put it, though. >>
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Wait, isn't that the plot to Death Jr. ??
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(11-13-2008, 03:24 PM)SmithyGCN Wrote: Wait, isn't that the plot to Death Jr. ??
Shocked
I know the idea wasn't that original, but I didn't expect that...
I had no idea it was already used...
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I just checked Death Jr, and it's not the same thing, although they have things in common...
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There's a Boss each 2, 3 stages. This boss is a "bad" Human, like a drug addicted singer, or a corrupt lawyer, etc.
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okaaaaaay, I've changed the plot since nobody liked the idea...

The Death goes to a party (that's why he's wearing a tuxedo) and meanwhile somebody is trying to get the 5 most powerful souls that the Death has locked up in his house. If a monster get the 5 souls he becomes the most powerful monster in the Underworld even more powerful than the Death. But this monster fails and the souls escape. Then the Death's butler tells him what just happened, so now he has to retrieve the 5 souls. This souls scape to the Human World and posses 5 humans...
Like this rockband singer:
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And I really want comments this time... :l

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I like the new story better, and the rock singer is awesome
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Singer's feet are blinking a lot.
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