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Waluigi Time
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Waluigi Land (Super Wario Bros 64)
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Critique before I start animating is appreciated. :>
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This might be just me, but I think he is leaning too far to the right. As he is now, it is almost like he is simply going to fall over.
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its only his head leaning forward. i recommend putting it a pixel back Wink
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Head is now attached to spine. I also bent the leg slightly to give a visually more stable stance.
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Made a few more little changes.
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Mostly fixed the shoulder a bit.
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I think that the buttons should be shifted to the right a little bit because as it stands it looks as though his torso is facing right smack toward us. Wario's are more to the side.
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Another very minor edit incorporating what Mighty mentioned by moving a few pixels around the overalls.
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#8
Only prob I see now is that Waluigi's chin isn't pointing down enough.
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Just needs a slight adjustment like this edit.
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#9
I really dig this. Maybe make his feet a pixel longer? Or try the buttons as 1x2 pixels instead of 2x2? Just a thought.
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Really appreciate the input so far. Shoes are lengthened, chin is pointed, Waluigi is ugly as ever.


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Couldn't shrink the buttons due to readability issues, sorry about that. :<
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This is incredible. Darn this was one of my first handheld games. The nostalgias..
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