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Tellis (PLAYER)
#1
Hello! Making this quick because I gotta go soon but:
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I'm looking for opinions on colors! The jacket's gotta be green for the default palette at least, for sure. But there's so many greens!

And thoughts on stance/shading/whatever are super welcome as well!

Ok, see ya!
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#2
You need a move where you either throw your eyebrows or shoot a laser from them or else you are banned from the project.

Also Jesterfrog Assist please.

(Also I'd never ban you, please make a sheet i want to play as you so bad :0 )
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#3
first one in the third row!
I think you really need to go for the brighter green.

I'd also suggest doing something about the top of the head. It's looking a little jaggy.
Cool! o/
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YES

my vote goes to either the first in row two or the first in row three. gotta have that bright scarf.
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first one in row two
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It's about FLIPPIN' time. Jesterfrog stand Cool

I'd say first row, third column.

A suggestion of my own:
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#7
^ literally perfect. that's how I always imagined him!
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Idle complete! After fussing with this for like a week (or more? geez) I think I'm finally happy with it.

(of course, flowing/fluttering scarf animation will be added later, gonna do all my other animations first, Bombergirl-style)
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#9
his jacket is sorta static, as if it was pasted onto the shirt rather than being actual clothes. a way to fix it may be by moving the pockets (zipper, highlights, etc.) with the animation.(?)
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(07-02-2014, 08:27 AM)recme Wrote: his jacket is sorta static, as if it was pasted onto the shirt rather than being actual clothes. a way to fix it may be by moving the pockets (zipper, highlights, etc.) with the animation.(?)

His jacket's painted on.

See those light green patches? Those are his nipples O_OSweatdrop;
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