06-21-2014, 10:14 AM
Bombergirl [PLAYABLE CHARACTER]
06-21-2014, 10:14 AM
06-21-2014, 11:03 AM
Why does she jump forward when she sits down when in the sprite boxes she actually goes a little backward? Just wondering.
Also, uhh, sorry about lack of contribution, I've kinda been enjoying my time off from school a bit too much and have been doing other things @___@
I will definitely start something today at least and maybe have it up in a day or two.
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Oh yeah, that's because I put the idle before the other frames and I hadn't centred it.
Progress. I'll be posting gifs too
06-21-2014, 05:18 PM
The walk looks too jerky. It's supposed to look kind of like she's merrily skipping, so I think it needs more varied frame delays.
By the way, I ended up staying home today so I finished her character select portrait sketch:
It's really rough and probably has some problems but hopefully it's clear enough for you to work with
06-21-2014, 07:30 PM
I tried changing the frame speeds for the walk, I updated the back punch attack.
Here's a WIP of the large portrait, too:
06-21-2014, 07:38 PM
Considering how Bombgirl looks drawn in that style, maybe it could be used as a concept of an evil counterpart of Mighty?
Actually I know it's a rough mockup ATM, but could you perhaps base Bombergirl's face off like, Irene or Jolyene, even? So it like...looks a little more uh, softer and young adultish?
I'd also suggest keeping art of her in the JoJo style with a closed mouth - otherwise, you'll have a really rash, spooky character.
Currently she kinda has a...Maleficent face going on, lol
06-21-2014, 09:15 PM
(06-21-2014, 07:38 PM)E-Man Wrote: Considering how Bombgirl looks drawn in that style, maybe it could be used as a concept of an evil counterpart of Mighty?
I actually did that before I even joined TSR
it was rejected
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(06-21-2014, 08:55 PM)Kosheh Wrote: Actually I know it's a rough mockup ATM, but could you perhaps base Bombergirl's face off like, Irene or Jolyene, even? So it like...looks a little more uh, softer and young adultish?That sucks that that's the impression it gives because I used Jolene as a reference. :c
Added the punch animation to my previous post.
(06-21-2014, 09:19 PM)Chris2Balls [:B] Wrote:
...oh .__.; sorry if I phrased that a bit assholey, Chris - I tend to go hard in the paint with crit sometimes and it just sounds like I'm making fun of it. x___x;
(I just woke up so bear with me, I'm having trouble decrypting what I just wrote below too)
I think it's the jawline vs the cheek vs the chin. The uh, "difference" between her cheek and her chin are a little too "hard" and defined, and as a result her jawline seems fairly pronounced, giving her an Angelina Jolie look.
Angelina Jolie is a fairly intimidating looking woman so that might actually work though, lol.
But yeah, Jolyene/Irene's cheekbone/is not that pronounced so it still maintains uh, "youthful chubbiness". Their cheekbones are even rounded to give that appearance.
the more i google images from jojo the more i would give my right testicle (the important one) to draw like araki
I don't agree with what you said about Jolyne/Irene having soft traits: if anything, I'd say she's one of the more intimidating female characters in the Jojo universe, along with her friend Ermes Costello.
Either way, I see what you mean, so I've made some changes! Daiyo Higashikata, Sugar Diamond and Yasuho Hirose have been my references.
06-22-2014, 09:51 AM
I thought I should point something out:
she should have a bit more of a... youthful looking bust
I hate to say it but she looks middle-aged or above right now with all that droopage
it just seems like a bit of a stretch considering she's so young
06-22-2014, 10:12 AM
Yeah, you're right, now that I look back at it, haha. I've brought her bust up, and I changed her arm slightly:
06-22-2014, 10:17 AM
Better! I should also mention that I've updated the OP with the new sheet and animations.
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06-22-2014, 10:59 AM
I think the head needs to be shrunk down, the shoulder-to-head width ratio just seems off to me compared to, say, your Sugar Diamond reference.
The lower torso/upper abdomen also seem a little too wide, considering how slim her arms are.