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#1
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This is my first submission attempt. I corrected most if not all the comments given to me in the spriting/pixel art thread.
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~Novs
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#2
Pretty good, but just one thing is bothering me. When Boo covers its face when looking at Mario, it's mouth should be shut.
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#3
I don't think people were finished critiquing it though. I'm not sure why you posted this since, and no offense, you even said yourself it wasn't ready to be submitted. I would suggest working on it more and posting the update later.
also, the icon text has the wrong font, next time please make sure it's Verdana size 7, non-anti-aliased. Tongue
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#4
Updated!
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~Novs
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#5
Updated again! Final Version!
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~Novs
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