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#1
08-11-2008, 10:36 PM
Its pretty much done, but the eyes suck badly. Can someone give me some tips to fix them?

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08-11-2008, 10:47 PM
Get rid of the black outline for the muzzle/snout. Move the eyes closer together. And where is the tail?
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#3
08-11-2008, 10:51 PM (This post was last modified: 08-11-2008, 11:59 PM by yoursavior.)
This better?

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08-12-2008, 12:38 AM (This post was last modified: 08-12-2008, 12:38 AM by Miles07.)
A definite improvement, but the eyes still need tweaking... Make them a bit wider, inward.
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08-12-2008, 12:43 AM
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#6
08-12-2008, 06:52 PM
I'd make his mouth a bit lighter so it's not confused with his live headset.
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