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Pew Pew Machine (Constantly Updating)
#1
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Pew pews things in a side-scrolly fashion.
C+C is super welcome
Current: [Image: pewpewmk4.png]
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#2
I like it. The only problem is, the green and brown seem too close together in brigthness. Neither color really pops out that much. A little contrast would make this look super, I think!
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#3
[Image: pewpewvar1.png]
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#4
Liking the first one. The green was a little too light for my tastes considering it's a space ship. Well done!

The back, I think, could use more... parts. Maybe two smaller thrusters stemming off the big one?
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#5
[Image: pewpewmk3.png]
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#6
This is really coming together! I would normally complain about shading like this, but in this case it works fantastically.
Perhaps adding some highlights to the brown area, a complimentary color maybe to make it pop?
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#7
[Image: pewpewmk4.png]
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#8
that combo of green and brown gives me that weird feeling the entire hull of the ship is made of bronze.
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#9
everything is bronze in space
#10
Looks good so far. I think you should experiment with the depth of the grey areas, maybe playing around with the Z-axis.
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#11
Looks great!
You're Headcrab54 from Facepunch, right?
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#12
yeahsonn
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#13
the design isn't daring enough... i find it rather stiff. i suggest you try breaking down the form a bit more in the long, straight areas on the ship.
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