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it's wonkilicious Wink
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With the worm monster, his forearms look a little thin in comparison to the rest of the arm.
Don't know if that's a WIP thing or not, though.
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@Chris: What's wonkilicious? I don't geeett it Very Sad
It has something to do with my name, right? That's bout all I can understand. Haha.

@Prontron: Which worm? The black and white one or the coloured one?

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I feel weird pointing out something in the work of someone so above my level but:

Our right wing - is it supposed to be curving around like the one on our left? It looks a little too straight on its own. When viewed in conjunction with the other wing it looks fine, so this might just be my tunnel vision speaking again.

Anyways this is looking excellent and I can't wait to see it finished. I love pieces with human/creature size differences like this Smile
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(12-23-2010, 06:58 PM)Delicious Wrote: @Prontron: Which worm? The black and white one or the coloured one?

(12-23-2010, 06:58 PM)Delicious Wrote: The black and white one
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@masquerain: Woah, just noticed that now. Thanks for pointing that out, I'll definitely have to fix that.

@Prontron: Ah, alright I'll see what I can do. Thank you.
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wonkilicious: wonky forms with delicious shading on top. and a lot of gratuity in the shading.
neck and torso look lazy and wonky, like some deformed michelin man. a lot in this composition seems superfluous to me.
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Looks like Chris learned some new words recently.

Also, the torso is bulging out too much. Considering the current length of his arms, the current torso would be positioned halfway inside the rock tower, which is bad.
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@Chris: Any idea how to help it from this? Not sure what I can do to fix the lazy/wonky look. I'm still in the process of just sketching out everything, so any help with the composition would be great. Not sure how to make it better. Also, what's the definition of "Gratuitly"?

@Lexou: Totally didn't see that, thanks. I'll fix that as well. Missed a bunch of stuff, but it's good that I haven't got into much detail with that half yet. Tongue
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Well, basically, what with the current neck stance and tower positioning, it would look better if the dragon was leaning towards the man rather than standing there all triumphant and whatnot.
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Sorry for the crap sketch, but what I wanted was the dragon to be listening to the character, rather wanting to attack him. I'll push the stomach in more so it doesn't look so bulgy. Thanks man.

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gratuity: doing something for the sake of doing it.
you may not like the muscle definition but it gives a bit more sense to the structure. i've messed around with a few other things.
anyway i hope it helps and i apologize for the mess. Smile
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Thanks man, tons of help. Am I getting any closer?
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getting closer to what?
the details are there but i'm not so sure about the shape still.
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Ment to say if it was getting better, rather closer. Anyways...

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Still playing around with the torso and the composition of the human figure.
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