Abyss - Running Guy

[Zee]

Well I figured I'd post this, it's a MAJOR work in progress, and I'm not sure I should've put muscles on him, but I'm looking for help from the more experienced spriters around. One limit is he cannot exceed 48x48 pixels, must remain green, and I'm hoping for something easy enough to sprite wads of dynamic poses for. (diving, somersaults, flips, stuff like that)



MAJOR C&C wanted, be BRUTAL.

[TPoe]

you should show his right arm. cus at that angle without the arm it looks like it's missing or scratching his ass.

[PrettyNier]

Show the right arm, add more contrast, smoothen it up a little and make the lightsource more definable. The body itself is pillow-shaded.

I'd also recommend cutting down on the muscle slightly, particularly for the shoulder, as it makes it difficult to tell whats going on exactly.