Mabelma's Thread of Stuff (Art)

[Mabelma]

You have a huge issue with line consistency, your characters are awfully messy and the background looks like it took five minutes at most.

Please note that I'm only critiquing the first piece, although there are consistency issues with the second one as well. They look too much like doodles and not enough like polished products.

And I can't read what the guy on the chair is at ALL. I don't know if he's facing at an angle or what.

Yes I have, I'm really bad with line consistency but I'm learning how to make it better so already on it.

The background didn't take much time since I was trying to focus most of the attention on the characters but I guess I failed. I think you are right, they look more like doodles than anything else.

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Well here we have a tankmen in my own 'style'

It was done for my profile image on NG.

Here we have a tattoo design I was asked to do by a member on the TBH community.

He will be getting it soon.

Well this was done for a collaboration back at the NewGrounds forum. It's called The NotePad Collab

You know he would.

3 more for now. I'm doing it this way because it's easier to reply to comments this way plus it gives me time to look for my art while I wait for comments.

Also do you guys remember this?

Those were my first drawings, to they were done only a year ago.