07-13-2010, 10:50 PM
(07-13-2010, 04:01 PM)Profanisaurus Wrote: There is some WEIRD STUFF happening with lineweight, there. The lines on the guns and face look way too light on the girl on the right
that or the other lines are too heavy, take your pick!
I guess it's too late now since you're near enough done, but the pose on Petra is looking really static. Like, she looks more like she's bent down to tie her shoe or something rather than looking like she's aiming a gun or ready for action or anything.
(What on earth is Donut Cannon? x: )
Donut Cannon is the best name ever little missy, he's my best friend
I can redo the linework. I'll thicken the lines on her face/guns. Thanks for the crit!