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[Art] First topic didn't go well here
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what, really

They're okay. The postures seem somewhat off, as do the proportions in some instances. Your torsos are too long and your legs are a little too short. The wrinkles are also kind of awkward, in that they appear around the edges but do not extend forward but do not go through the entire set of clothing as they should.

I'd also suggest completely rethinking how you draw faces. Those look like balls and could use a lot of work. The noses just kind of.. end, the mouth is nothing but a line and the eyes aren't any good from any stretch of the imagination. /:

Don't get me wrong, though, it's still not that bad.
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[Art] First topic didn't go well here - by Tero - 03-12-2009, 08:49 PM
RE: [Art] First topic didn't go well here - by PrettyNier - 03-13-2009, 12:27 PM

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