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(04-29-2021, 02:06 AM)Raccoon Sam Wrote: works fine here [Image: gvJvnye.png]

Oh, I guess that's my problem then. Oops! XD

(04-28-2021, 07:40 PM)Luigifan1115 Wrote: What's wrong with this sheet? I tried to post it but it got declined.
[Image: gvJvnye]

Here's a few things I'm going to point out:

- The overall shape is alright, but the bottom-left corner of Boyfriend's face on some of the sprites looks a little bit pointed.
Here's an example of his face that's a little bit rounder on the bottom-left corner:
   
(Feel free to use it as a reference. Smile)

- Player 2's hair outline color looks a bit odd compared to Player 1's hair outline color. Try making it a darker shade of orange.

- Something I'd suggest doing is moving the credits tag and the palettes below the rest of the sprites instead of on the right side of them.
(A little bit of it has to do with file size. But you don't have to do this one if you don't want to. Tongue)

- One last thing I'd also want to point out is that the text size for the palette's labels and your name is a bit hard to read. Maybe make the text size a little bit bigger so it can be easier to read.
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Sheet denied? - by Luigifan1115 - 04-28-2021, 07:40 PM
RE: Sheet denied? - by DogToon64 - 04-28-2021, 07:57 PM
RE: Sheet denied? - by Raccoon Sam - 04-29-2021, 02:06 AM
RE: Sheet denied? - by Luigifan1115 - 05-11-2021, 09:59 AM
RE: Sheet denied? - by DogToon64 - 04-29-2021, 08:08 PM
RE: Sheet denied? - by DioShiba - 05-15-2021, 07:02 AM

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