12-26-2018, 06:19 PM
It's looking good, so far, but something feels a bit "blocky" about it. Like, the necklace seems refined and doesn't need any further manipulation, but the clothing doesn't look as if it's flowing or stressed the way it's meant to, and the body looks relatively lifeless.
My biggest issues really are the hair (which looks like if a mop has been frozen over) - and I can't tell if the hair's actually meant to be blonde and covered in snow. The lips seem to have more for the top lip than for the bottom, making it seem like she's either got a large overbite she's trying to cover up or something went wrong with that lip-puffing thing. The fingers too, differ by the hand. They're either blunt-ended or sharp and pointy.
The background looks pretty neat under the impression of the "vague silhouette" thing that's going on, but the darker and closer background layers seem like there's more to be added to them, if that is your current intention.
My biggest issues really are the hair (which looks like if a mop has been frozen over) - and I can't tell if the hair's actually meant to be blonde and covered in snow. The lips seem to have more for the top lip than for the bottom, making it seem like she's either got a large overbite she's trying to cover up or something went wrong with that lip-puffing thing. The fingers too, differ by the hand. They're either blunt-ended or sharp and pointy.
The background looks pretty neat under the impression of the "vague silhouette" thing that's going on, but the darker and closer background layers seem like there's more to be added to them, if that is your current intention.
![[Image: WatSig.png]](https://i.ibb.co/ZNzH7fK/WatSig.png)