I saw some of your stuff on the Discord Chat, I really dig the style you have going for these.
I think the only one that bothers me a little bit is the white haired girl with the green dress, maybe it's me but I don't know if the black line work is helping the details in that specific one. Could be me but I feel like it would benefit from some sel-out and anti-aliasing in some areas? I don't know if you intend to go back to that one but it is something I would keep in mind from making the line work feel jagged in some areas.
Other than that I like the work.
I think the only one that bothers me a little bit is the white haired girl with the green dress, maybe it's me but I don't know if the black line work is helping the details in that specific one. Could be me but I feel like it would benefit from some sel-out and anti-aliasing in some areas? I don't know if you intend to go back to that one but it is something I would keep in mind from making the line work feel jagged in some areas.
Other than that I like the work.