06-30-2016, 02:03 PM
Is this your first animation? If it's not, then how long have you been animating for?
Anyway, from what I've seen, it's an alright animation (especially for a beginner); however, since I'm an animator, you have plenty of room for improvement. One thing I've noticed right off the bat is how stiff the movement is. If you'd bend a lot more of the body and exaggerated the actions a bit more, then it'll give this animation a big step in the right direction.
I have more advice I could give you, but I'll only go into depth if you want critique.
Anyway, from what I've seen, it's an alright animation (especially for a beginner); however, since I'm an animator, you have plenty of room for improvement. One thing I've noticed right off the bat is how stiff the movement is. If you'd bend a lot more of the body and exaggerated the actions a bit more, then it'll give this animation a big step in the right direction.
I have more advice I could give you, but I'll only go into depth if you want critique.
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