Weh.

[Shawn]

Well for starters, that drawing doesn't really look like anything remotely readable.

Second, since Wario is a heavily stylized character anyway there isn't much reason to give him the muscle structure of a regular human. Combining realism with cartoony aspects is fine but you need to find a more delicate balance cuz detailed muscles tend to look really out of place on stuff like this.

Also, you got a real ego issue from the looks of it. get your head out of your ass with shit like "I'm pretty sure this undeniably looks better than Nintendo's." You sure do seem to criticize others a lot for someone who's disregarding the advice of everyone else in this thread.