07-21-2015, 10:48 PM
I think the lines denoting muscles on his shoulders end up reading more like rigid details on pauldrons (like the big ones Samus has) rather than muscles.
Note that in most art of Wario, including your own avatar, the shoulder is generally left undetailed so as to draw more attention to his arm muscles instead.
The running animation's frames are nicely done, but it still feels really generic and uninspired. It seems like it's really lacking in character, being little more than a standard run cycle any other muscly guy might make, rather than the sort of unique run cycle a repugnant, greedy, fat guy would do. I'm sorry all I've got at the moment is highly subjective terms with lots of room for interpretation, but it's what I've got for now.
That said, I love the overall idea of the project and most of the design (would personally prefer slightly more belly fat) and am excited to see how this develops in the future.
Note that in most art of Wario, including your own avatar, the shoulder is generally left undetailed so as to draw more attention to his arm muscles instead.
The running animation's frames are nicely done, but it still feels really generic and uninspired. It seems like it's really lacking in character, being little more than a standard run cycle any other muscly guy might make, rather than the sort of unique run cycle a repugnant, greedy, fat guy would do. I'm sorry all I've got at the moment is highly subjective terms with lots of room for interpretation, but it's what I've got for now.
That said, I love the overall idea of the project and most of the design (would personally prefer slightly more belly fat) and am excited to see how this develops in the future.