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Pixel Practice - Terrorverse
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I think you should, on top of fixing the sprite, fix the character design too. Even though this character is supposed to transform into a wolf, no other features match with the wolf version, and vice versa. This makes the transformation seem like an afterthought.

Try making both forms slightly more similar to each other, not just in clothing. You could add that red hair bang on the wolf form, for example. That would also differ the character from other eventual wolf characters.

And I for one don't really like that long nose that much, the way it's made hurts readability with the eyes. Try using colored outlines for that, or using a smaller nose design.
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Pixel Practice - Terrorverse - by Bombshell93 - 06-09-2015, 04:48 AM
RE: Pixel Practice - Terrorverse - by Gors - 06-09-2015, 11:09 AM
RE: Pixel Practice - Terrorverse - by Bombshell93 - 06-09-2015, 12:11 PM
RE: Pixel Practice - Terrorverse - by Bombshell93 - 06-09-2015, 09:55 PM
RE: Pixel Practice - Terrorverse - by TheShyGuy - 06-10-2015, 12:10 AM
RE: Pixel Practice - Terrorverse - by Bombshell93 - 06-10-2015, 04:42 AM
RE: Pixel Practice - Terrorverse - by Bombshell93 - 06-10-2015, 10:01 PM
RE: Pixel Practice - Terrorverse - by Bombshell93 - 06-12-2015, 01:16 AM
RE: Pixel Practice - Terrorverse - by Bombshell93 - 06-16-2015, 03:40 AM
RE: Pixel Practice - Terrorverse - by Bombshell93 - 06-17-2015, 05:41 PM
RE: Pixel Practice - Terrorverse - by Bombshell93 - 06-19-2015, 07:03 AM
RE: Pixel Practice - Terrorverse - by Gors - 06-19-2015, 07:38 AM
RE: Pixel Practice - Terrorverse - by Bombshell93 - 06-19-2015, 08:41 AM
RE: Pixel Practice - Terrorverse - by Gors - 06-19-2015, 11:44 AM
RE: Pixel Practice - Terrorverse - by Bombshell93 - 06-20-2015, 06:06 AM

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