Paper Mario animations

[E-Man]

Darn it! Apparently, Imgur is over capacity at the time I'm writing this post and I can't really use it as it's like this. With that in mind, I ha ve no choice but to dust off my Photobucket account for this update.



The Big Lantern Ghost is the last character with a unique body type I began progress for on for this short. Even though he is holding a lantern in this sketch and his sheet will have it, he won't have his lantern in the actual short for plot specific reasons.

Speaking of the plot, I was wondering if there are any parts I could rewrite to make it more "show-don't-tell." I plan to do something about Yellow's rant at the end since it goes against this idea (and it is a little mean-spirited), but anything else you want me to alter in the original script? In a Skype chat, a friend of mine said that Yellow knows about the Kammy Koopa situation, yet he is told the details again anyway. What do you think of this?

EDIT: These links lead to each part of the script.
http://www.vg-resource.com/thread-26049-...#pid588856
http://www.vg-resource.com/thread-26049-...#pid589005
http://www.vg-resource.com/thread-26049-...#pid589116