Kelvin Shadewing's Pixels

[Zapchu25]

Nevermind. Finished the arm, and added myself as test prey. XD

It's looking really good! 

However, you need to work on refining. The line art for the current image is kinda' jaggy. The stomach loos sharp at some points even though it's arguably the roundest part of the bird. Here's an image I took from E-Man to illustrate how to solve the issue.



Another thing is the shading is pretty odd. Some shades you use only for one part of the face. You can disperse these across the entire piece.

The shading also suffers from being jaggy at parts, and different parts of the body don't seem to cast or receive shadows (namely the arm). Use your shading as a way to accentuate different parts of the body.

Here's a visual of what I mean.


It's like when you write a paper, just look over it a few times and teak it to perfection. Chances are you'll always miss something.