some new crap

[GaryASPG]

Didn't really have time to edit the rest, but I do like the DQ MC guy you made on this sheet a lot. Anyway, my critiques for these are pretty simple - DQ's slimes are usually pretty thick so you have to take into account that theyre not just pure liquid (or slime). However, if you make them TOO thick they don't appear to be slimey at all. Finding the balance between the two is important to making it seem right.

I wasn't sure if the 2nd one was supposed to be metallic or just a different color, but if it was I made an example of how to achieve that with a slime. Might not be perfect (probably needs more shine) but gives you the general idea.

As far as the axe wielding green guy goes, I wasn't sure if he was meant to be fat or straight muscular. Usually when you reach a certain weight you can't see six packs anymore (and you definitely can't see your rib cage at that level). I think a big guy is more intimidating when he's fat, though, so that's what I went with. If he's meant to be muscular you should consider downgrading his weight size a bit.

C2B has the ride idea about your goat, just make sure to use a reference or two, look up some muscular legs and just try to apply that to a goat's.