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[DRAWINGS] Doodles and Finished Pieces 2.0
The part of his palm that connects to the thumb on his fist is too far in the center of his hand at that angle, causing his thumb to come too far in the middle. Have you looked at references for fists?

The other hand pointing to himself doesn't have properly shaped knuckles; again references are super helpful but basically you want to at least make sure that the knuckles are all of similar widths (what is sticking out to me most is how the index knuckle is kind of huge (also flat) compared to the other knuckles.

I would also space his lower legs and feet out just a tad; they're ramming into eachother just a bit unnaturally.

These are just things I see immediately, hope they are clear.
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RE: [DRAWINGS] Doodles and Finished Pieces 2.0 - by Garamonde - 06-28-2016, 10:38 PM

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