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[DRAWINGS] Doodles and Finished Pieces 2.0
Phase 2 of the walking animation. This shows how many changes I need to make, since I made quite a few fatal errors. Not to mention it was on-hold since frame 8 went missing after a draft of wind from my window spewed the papers into limbo.

I'm also learning how to list mistakes so I don't redo them again.

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Frame 9 has 2 major errors:

-Not enough feet contrast, it looks like the foot pauses for a second.

-The left arm becomes a bit short when swaying back to the right whilst returning to frame 1, which looks off.

Frame 5:

-The left arm needs to be a bit lower as it looks sloppy when looping.

Frame 6:

-The right arm needs to poke out less at it looks like it flickers for one frame.

Frame 3:

-Right arm should begin lowering here, as it looks choppy when it moves to frame 4.

Frame 1:

-Right leg is unbent, looks awkward when popping from unbent to bent for a frame.

All frames:

-Head bobbing needs to be toned down.

If anybody else has anything else to criticize upon, please tell me. As I'm enjoying this learning process.
I like to make models in my free time. I also make weird games, too.
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RE: [DRAWINGS] Doodles and Finished Pieces 2.0 - by Filler - 09-19-2015, 03:20 AM

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