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[DRAWINGS] Doodles and Finished Pieces 2.0
(03-05-2015, 07:54 AM)BlueBlur97 Wrote: @Kosheh: Thanks for the advice. The thing is i really dont like the way the female eyes are drawn in the DBZ art style. SERIOUS lack of variety. Only two different eye shapes.

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Something bugs me about this drawing. I cant put my finger on it though...

It's the front foot (her left, our right) The way the foot's drawn is too thin, and so it appears that it's not securely planted on the ground, thus making the character appear as if they're standing on the balls of their feet. This in turn goes against her relaxed body language waist-up, thus causing a chain reaction of unnatural posing.

tl;dr fix that foot and make it look better grounded and Everything Will Be OK.


Also I'm pretty sure the Dragon Quest games have a bigger variety of female eyes, giving you a little bit more to work from. @__@;

EDIT: where is her neck!!!
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RE: [DRAWINGS] Doodles and Finished Pieces 2.0 - by Kosheh - 03-05-2015, 12:04 PM

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