Shade (HELPER)

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It lacks build-up, so I tried putting some in in my edit, along with some distortion for more effect.

Why do I feel the distortion is more so because you were beingtoo lazy to finish it :y. Joking aside I am gonna agree with Chris, the motion seems rather weak, and I think the sleeves(?) should act more like rubber whip grappling, so something like the motion of Luffy's gum gum pistol (only example I thought of.), with it having a bit of force behind it and it would look more cartoony imo.