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Ashura's Alchemy Lab
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I like your latest sprites!

I think the sclera for the character in white and the character in black is a little too broad.

For the feral knight there, I think the "skirt" falls unnaturally. It should probably cover more of the leg, and the outline should follow better what the folds suggest.
As for the sword, I suppose you intend to make it look worn or stylize it somehow, but it really does look a little too gritty, so I think you should try to make the shades and lighting cleaner. The chest also has some slight banding you ought to clear up a little.
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Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by -Ash- - 02-08-2013, 10:59 PM
RE: Alchemist Sprite Thread - by Bombshell93 - 02-08-2013, 11:22 PM
RE: Alchemist Sprite Thread - by -Ash- - 02-08-2013, 11:26 PM
RE: Alchemist Sprite Thread - by Bombshell93 - 02-09-2013, 12:18 AM
RE: Alchemist Sprite Thread - by Novally - 02-08-2013, 11:46 PM
RE: Alchemist Sprite Thread - by -Ash- - 02-08-2013, 11:51 PM
RE: Alchemist Sprite Thread - by Novally - 02-08-2013, 11:58 PM
RE: Alchemist Sprite Thread - by Thanatos-Zero - 02-09-2013, 01:39 AM
RE: Alchemist Sprite Thread - by -Ash- - 06-07-2013, 03:52 AM
RE: Alchemist Sprite Thread - by Gors - 06-07-2013, 08:14 AM
RE: Alchemist Sprite Thread - by -Ash- - 06-07-2013, 12:12 PM
RE: Alchemist Sprite Thread - by Thanatos-Zero - 06-07-2013, 05:07 PM
RE: Alchemist Sprite Thread - by -Ash- - 06-22-2013, 01:01 AM
RE: Alchemist Sprite Thread - by -Ash- - 06-22-2013, 07:45 PM
RE: Alchemist Sprite Thread - by -Ash- - 07-27-2013, 07:25 PM
RE: Alchemist Sprite Thread - by deathbyjaguar - 07-27-2013, 10:07 PM
RE: Alchemist Sprite Thread - by Gors - 07-28-2013, 07:55 AM
RE: Alchemist Sprite Thread - by -Ash- - 07-29-2013, 01:29 AM
RE: Alchemist Sprite Thread - by -Ash- - 09-10-2013, 05:32 PM
RE: Alchemist Sprite Thread - by Vipershark - 09-10-2013, 07:15 PM
RE: Alchemist Sprite Thread - by -Ash- - 09-10-2013, 09:41 PM
RE: Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by -Ash- - 02-12-2014, 04:54 AM
RE: Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by Vipershark - 02-13-2014, 03:38 PM
RE: Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by -Ash- - 02-14-2014, 11:02 PM
RE: Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by -Ash- - 02-28-2014, 03:46 AM
RE: Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by -Ash- - 02-28-2014, 09:21 PM
RE: Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by Sketchasaurus - 03-01-2014, 06:49 AM
RE: Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by -Ash- - 03-01-2014, 08:01 AM
RE: Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by -Ash- - 03-03-2014, 12:46 PM
RE: Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by Sketchasaurus - 03-03-2014, 08:30 PM
RE: Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by -Ash- - 03-25-2014, 07:21 PM
RE: Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by -Ash- - 04-15-2014, 12:25 AM
RE: Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by -Ash- - 04-20-2014, 08:48 AM
RE: Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by Iocus - 04-20-2014, 10:00 PM
RE: Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by Kelvin - 04-24-2014, 05:32 PM
RE: Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by -Ash- - 04-25-2014, 08:26 PM
RE: Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by Kelvin - 04-26-2014, 05:36 AM
RE: Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by -Ash- - 05-02-2014, 09:20 AM
RE: Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by Iocus - 05-03-2014, 12:44 PM
RE: Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by -Ash- - 05-10-2014, 07:52 PM
RE: Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by -Ash- - 05-20-2014, 08:10 AM
RE: Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by Paladin - 05-20-2014, 08:36 AM
RE: Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by -Ash- - 05-20-2014, 08:41 AM
RE: Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by -Ash- - 05-20-2014, 02:21 PM
RE: Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by -Ash- - 05-25-2014, 01:29 PM
RE: Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by Paladin - 05-25-2014, 01:42 PM
RE: Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by -Ash- - 05-27-2014, 03:40 AM
RE: Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by -Ash- - 05-28-2014, 06:30 PM
RE: Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by TheShyGuy - 05-28-2014, 07:05 PM
RE: Ashura's Alchemy Lab - by -Ash- - 06-30-2014, 10:40 AM

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