02-08-2013, 11:22 PM
for now I'll comment on the customs because their much easier to pin point and explain the issues,
there is no contrast and too high saturation, the shape is also just a blatant blob,
I also recommend you post the sprite regular size with no zoom (we'll be able to see how it reads better and should we need to see it pixel for pixel we can simply copy and paste it into our preferred editing program)
I'd advise you try something a little tougher so we can see how good you are and how you can properly improve, something like an RPG overworld sprite or a cartoony platformer character.
there is no contrast and too high saturation, the shape is also just a blatant blob,
I also recommend you post the sprite regular size with no zoom (we'll be able to see how it reads better and should we need to see it pixel for pixel we can simply copy and paste it into our preferred editing program)
I'd advise you try something a little tougher so we can see how good you are and how you can properly improve, something like an RPG overworld sprite or a cartoony platformer character.