toyed around with your character's proportions a bit (mainly the face), and tried the eyes.
Changes:
-made the face look more similar to Sol's
-got rid of unnecessary selout
-simplified clothes
-tweaked the arms slightly
-got rid of some AA
-reworked the hair
-got rid of a gray, blue, and brown.
EDIT: now that I look at it, actually, I liked your character's pose like this more:
If you tweaked the face to make the proportions more like Sol's, I think this pose would work much better.
Changes:
-made the face look more similar to Sol's
-got rid of unnecessary selout
-simplified clothes
-tweaked the arms slightly
-got rid of some AA
-reworked the hair
-got rid of a gray, blue, and brown.
EDIT: now that I look at it, actually, I liked your character's pose like this more:
If you tweaked the face to make the proportions more like Sol's, I think this pose would work much better.