07-10-2012, 12:33 AM
arisa seems rather ok, but sengi now looks worse :V. it appears its due to the desing behind the legs: they seem to be rather thick compared to the hips, and the rest of the proportions on their bodies. if arisa for example is rather chubby, her hips should be a bit more wide(otherwise the legs look as if they came out magically from her skirt).
-now that i take a second look at it, the whole shading on her body seems rather odd as a whole. her chest looks displaced due to this, and the shapes arent as defined as they should(if she isnt chubby, it might be due to the way the vest was done)
in sengi's case, its all due the way you added way too many details on her kneesocks. seeing how the smaller sprites were designed, i'd make more sense for arisa to wear regular socks while sengi wears black tights.
why dont you just simplify it and go for a
-now that i take a second look at it, the whole shading on her body seems rather odd as a whole. her chest looks displaced due to this, and the shapes arent as defined as they should(if she isnt chubby, it might be due to the way the vest was done)
in sengi's case, its all due the way you added way too many details on her kneesocks. seeing how the smaller sprites were designed, i'd make more sense for arisa to wear regular socks while sengi wears black tights.
why dont you just simplify it and go for a