Pokemon: The Commercial

[Gors]

Thank you for the criticism.

sure, just be sure to include the "And if you're hellbent on ignoring what I said due to 'I use premade sprites and there is nothing wrong in this', I'll just say that it indeed is wrong and it won't be as good as it would be with custom work. Since ripped sprites are already premade, they will rarely combine with your comic. Grab a real comic and read it. Notice how the 'camera' or perspective shuffles often to better represent characters, places and such. It isn't permanently locked to top-down view, as yours. Also, sprites doesn't represent movements and/or feelings well." part

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to be honest fuck with this, come back when you fukcing grow up and learn to accept criticism wholly

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also the print screens are much more interesting and funnier than your comic, good job