[Sprite Comic] Pokemon The Commercial

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Your resolution is completely off, and The sprites are merely rotated and resized to pass off as a different panel. There really is no way to improve this other than to give the comic a coherent theme or look, by either using similar sprites or doing it from scratch, in addition to looking in to some storyboarding tips and making the dialogue clearer.

This looks like some solid advice to me, but this seems to be getting nowhere so I'm just going to stop now.

Everything aside, try to make everything coherent and thematically familiar, along with making dialogue and the panels more interesting and less confusing. Try switching up the sizes of the panels and get different angles. It will take more time but the effort will be worth it. Also don't try to rush the story with too many things happening at once in the beginning, but at the same time make sure the story doesn't drag towards the middle, as that is a common mistake with comics.