Thank you for all of your criticism, it is greatly appreciated. And now I see what you mean by "link has some black on him" so thank you.
Here is a new version. I might get around to a side view later tonight.
I made the ship more "elliptical"
I changed the colors of the sail, giving it a darker outline and better shading
I did the same to the mast
![[Image: korledit1.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fimg840.imageshack.us%2Fimg840%2F9656%2Fkorledit1.png&hash=4707395d09fb08aed0cc8f0214805b12)
Here is a new version. I might get around to a side view later tonight.
I made the ship more "elliptical"
I changed the colors of the sail, giving it a darker outline and better shading
I did the same to the mast