I agree with Reverend Parris, it's far to early to give you real criticism. I'll give you as much suggestions as I can from what I can see.
- Not sure if those are black mountains/towers in the background, but if they are perhaps you could highlight around them to suggest that they appear infront of the bright green sky? If they're apart of the background, then nevermind.
- The shading on the face looks smudged and blurry.
- The shape of the eyes are quite odd, as well as the head.
- It is flat due to lack of dark shadow and consistancy with the light source. The hood should not have the lightest green overtop of it, rather the green should highlight around the hood due to it being presented in the back of the character. It will be hard for you to create any light/shadow to express the facial features because of where you set the source of light.
Perhaps a reference for the face could help you figure it out?
- Not sure if those are black mountains/towers in the background, but if they are perhaps you could highlight around them to suggest that they appear infront of the bright green sky? If they're apart of the background, then nevermind.
- The shading on the face looks smudged and blurry.
- The shape of the eyes are quite odd, as well as the head.
- It is flat due to lack of dark shadow and consistancy with the light source. The hood should not have the lightest green overtop of it, rather the green should highlight around the hood due to it being presented in the back of the character. It will be hard for you to create any light/shadow to express the facial features because of where you set the source of light.
Perhaps a reference for the face could help you figure it out?
