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No comments? Bah.

Well, since I HIGHLY doubt any of you have seen these, I figure it's safe to show them without giving away who I am (even though if you know me, you know it, and if you don't... Well, you don't.)

Yeah, I see a few problems like how the 1st one's stance is too wide and the 3rd one's bangs are too high up, but how's the style in general?

EDIT: I was wondering why the last one looked funny. Fixed.

EDIT2: Changed the shape of the first person's head and took that one red pixel out. Didn't get around to fixing other obvious problems.

I'll take a guess and say 2-D.
I think Elk was referring to those.
But I prefer looking at these than splices. You can say that splices are well spliced but it can't go any further than that, and the help we can give you for that type of work is more limited.
First of all, the thick outline seems to eat the characters and reduce them in a way. You have to focus on structuring the bodies more carefully, like think about the joints, the frame, etc. When you consider a pose, think about where the weight is distributed: which leg is the character leaning on, and why, for what purpose (this is more about the character's intention of posing that way)? It's good that you're trying to find your style and I respect that, but going for manga-esque components seems like a facility for now, and to me you don't seem to have appropriated it for it to be integrated to your style yet. I'll post this for now but I have an edit accompanied with notes coming up.


the red square is not a thing to hold her hair, it's where her hair starts out, idk if you understand. :/