TSR PokeDex Project

[Wes]

Hmmm... I'm not really sure what I could remove without making it look... well...hmmm.

I don't want to remove his flower neck thing since thats obviously a key part of the design. The wings are obviously needed.. What if I reposition the red part of it's tail so it's not getting in the way of the wings, or just remove them in general?


Also, I don't think the kangaroo rat thing would be too much of an issue if they look different enough (I'm not saying mine does, I'm just saying in general). I mean, look at the Pikachu's in gen 4/5.

Yeah the red part of the tail was sticking out to me too. Like I wasn't sure if it was part of the wings or not. I think the problem is just how small it is. Like I know it has to be small, but somethings seems cluttered to me. Maybe its the two leaves at the base of the wing. If you remove those and maybe just have the wings connect to the body the way that the first evolution's wing does, it might look a little less bunched up.

As for the rat, its just that the body shape remind me off earlier Pikachu and Raichu designs (like the Gen 1 sprites) and the tail really looks a lot like Raichu's. But you should probably wait for more input before changing anything.